托福獨(dú)立作文結(jié)尾小結(jié)

一、結(jié)論性---------通過對(duì)文章前面的討論,引出或重申文章的中心思想及觀點(diǎn).e.g:[1].Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemaysafelydrawtheconclusionthat.....[2].Insummary/Inaword,itismorevaluable.......

二、后果性------揭示所討論的問題若不解決,將產(chǎn)生的嚴(yán)重后果.

e.g:[1].Wemustcallforanimmediatemethod,becausethecurrentphenomenonof...,ifallowedtoproceed,willsurelyleadtotheheavycostof.......

[2].Obviously,ifweignore/areblindtotheproblem,thereiseverychancethat..willbeputindanger.

三、號(hào)召性--------呼吁讀者行動(dòng)起來,采取行動(dòng)或提請(qǐng)注意.

e.g:[1].Itistimethatweurgedanimmediateendtotheundesirabletendcyof......[2].Itisessentialthareffectivemeasuresshouldbetakentocorrectthetendency.

四、建議性--------對(duì)所討論的問題提出建議性的意見,包括建議和具體的解決問題的方法.e.g:[1].Whileitcannotbesolvedimmediately,stillthereareways.Themostpopularis....Anothermethodis...Stillanotheroneis.....

[2].Awareness/Recognitionoftheproblemisthefirststeptowardthesituation.

五、方向性的結(jié)尾方式----其與建議性的唯一差別就是對(duì)問題解決提出總的,大體的方向或者指明前景.

e.g:[1].Manysolutionsarebeingofferedhere,allofthemmakesomesense,butnoneisadequateenough.Theproblemshouldberecognizedinawideway.

[2].Thereisnoquickmethodtotheissueof..,but..mightbehelpful/benefical.[3].Thegreatchallengetodayis......Thereismuchdifficulty,but........

六、意義性的結(jié)尾方式-------->文章結(jié)尾的時(shí)候,從更高的更新的角度指出所討論的問題的重要性以及其深遠(yuǎn)的意義!

e.g:[1].Followingthesesuggestionsmaynotguaranteethesuccess,butthepayoffmightbeworththeeffort.Itwillnotonlybenefitbutalsobenefit.....

[2].Inanycase,whetheritisposotiveornegative,onethingiscertainthatitwillundoubtedly..

常用句型

1.therebe

(1)Therehasbeenadebateaboutwhetherprivateorpublicschoolismorebeneficialfortheall-arounddevelopmentofstudents.

(2)Therehasbeenadebateaboutwhetheroldpeopleshouldbeforcedtoretirefromworkattheageofsixty,regardlessoftheirownwishes.

(3)Therehasbeendebateaboutwhoshouldberesponsibleforthedeterioratingsituationofnaturalenvironment.

(4)Therehasbeengrowingevidence(indicating)thatyearsofcigarettesmokingisdetrimentaltopeople’shealth.

(5)Beyondnumerousobviousreasons,thereliesamorein-depthcause.

(6)With(Asaresultof)theadventofmass-productionandanimprovementinlivingstandards,therehasbeenagreaterneedforadvertisingthaneverbefore.

擴(kuò)展閱讀：托福獨(dú)立作文句型總結(jié)

開頭

1.SomepeopleholdtheopinionthatAissuperiortoBinmanyways.Others,however,

contradictA.Accordingtomypersonalityandfondness,IwouldpreferAratherthanBforthefollowingreasons/therearenumerousreasonswhyIthinkA.

2.IthinkitistruethatAorB,butwhichoneismoresignificant?(Whenitcomes

to____)ObviouslyBisthecorrectanswer/moreandmorepeoplebegintoA,Ican’tagreewiththemconsideringthefollowingreasons./Both…whichismoresignificant?MyanswergoestoAforthefollowingreasons./somepeopleargue,hold,advocate,claim,prefer,….Iamoneofthem.TherearenumerousreasonswhyA./somepeoplesay,claim,arguethat,Idisagreewiththisstatement.

3.TherehasbeenaheateddiscussionamongpeopleaboutA.SomepeopleholdthatB,

however,IprefertoB.SupposingthatC.withoutB,howcan;withoutB,howcan…4.2。將原題復(fù)述___________________________________________Whenfacedwiththe

decisionofAofB，quiteafewwoulddeemthat______________________，butothers，incontrast，believeA/Basthepremierchoiceandthatisalsomypoint。Amongcountlessfactorswhichinfluence-A/-B，therearethreeconspicuousaspectsasfollows.5.1.Theanswerofthisstatementdependsonyourownexperienceandlifestyle。Inmy

pointview，buyingcomputersisasimportantas，ifnotmoreimportantthan，buyingbooks。Soitissagaciousto____________。Amongcountlessfactorswhichinfluencethechoice，thesearethreeconspicuousaspectsasfollows。

中間

1Themain/foremostreasonisthatAconsidering___________.Itcanbegivena1.○

concreteexample__________.

2Although_________,thereisnoevidencetosuggestthatBisalwaysbetterthanA.○

what’smore,ifyouseethat________,youcanunderstanditmoredeeply.

3Thereasonsarequiteclear.Aboveall,________.Perhapsthemostimportantexample○

ofAisthat_________

1AmoreessentialfactorwhyIadvocatetheargumentof__________isthat___/○

AnotherreasonwhyIadvocate/prefertheattitudeofA/Ineedtomentionisthat__________.Thereisgoodevidencetoshowthat____/Takethecaseofathingthat__________.Thisdemonstratemyargumentastepfurther/wecanseethat__________,furthermore________

ThisisarbitrarytojudgeBaccordingonlytotheexcuseImentionedintheaboveparagraphAnotherstrongargumentisthat_________./Thethirdandprettymuchimportantreasonisthat______Thisdemonstratetheundeniablefactthat_________Firstofall，perhapsonedisadvantagesto____________isthat______________。Forinstance，__________________。Anotherdrawbackto_____________involvesthepossibilitythat____________。Forexample，____________。

1Ofcourse,choosingBalsohasadvantagestosomeextent,for______○

2AlthoughBalsohasitsseeminglyprofoundadvantages,itcanonlybeachievedunder○

2.3.4.

5.certainconditionsbecause______.

結(jié)尾

1.Butifallthesefactorsarecontemplated/takenallthesefactorsintoaccount,the

advantagesofAcarrymoreweightthanthoseofB.fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemayfinallydrawtheconclusionthat____________.Andsuchexperiencewilldefinitelybehelpfulinone’slaterlife.

2.Afterunderstandingthereasoningabove,it’squitesafenowtosay:tochooseAisa

wiseaction.3.Inaword，tochooseAorBissomethingofadilemmatothepublicbecausethey

sometimesareconfusedbytheseeminglygoodqualitiesofB，andneglectthegenuinelygoodaspectsofA。Forthereasonspresentedabove，IstronglycommittothenotionthatA，butnotB。

開頭段

開頭1：

Oneday,mysister,whohasbeenpregnantforsixmonths,caughtabadcold.Shewantedtotakemedicineforhercoldbutshewonderedwhetherthemedicinewilldoharmtothebaby.Sheturnedonthecomputer,wentonlineandorsearchedforinformationonthesafetyofthecoldmedicine.Afterthat,shemadearightdecision.Theimpactthatcomputerhasonourdailylifeisundeniable.Thereisagrowingawarenessofboththepositiveandnegativeinfluencesthatcomputershavebroughttous.Somepeoplemightberighttothinkthatcomputershavemadelifecomplexandstressful.Frommypointofview,thoseshortcomingscanbeneglectedwhentheadvantagesofcomputersarementioned.

開頭2：

Accordingtoarecentstatisticontheinternet,thenumberofsingle-childfamilyoccupies75percentofChinesefamilies,andundoubtedlyhasthetendencyofincreasing.Itfollowsthatparentsorotheradultrelativesmaylikelypaymoreattentiontotheirchildren,forthereasonthattheenergyofparentshasbeensavedalotcomparedtothosewhoownseveralchildren.Somepeopleinsistonmakingdecisionsfortheirchildren,consideringthattheyaretooyoungtojudge.However,othersbelievethatthereishardlyanynecessitytohelpsothatchildrenwillcultivatethecapabilityofanalyzingimportantproblems.Frommyperspective,Icompletelyagreewiththelatteridea.開頭3：

Withthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,moreandmorecompanies(includinginternationalcompaniesandsmallcompanies)arefounded,buttherearenotenoughpeopletotakethesepositions.Soalargenumberofworkingopportunitiesareprovidedtopeoplewhoarestillteenagerstudents.Insomecountries,somepeoplethinkifteenagersdoajobwhiletheyarestillstudyinginschool,itmayhaveabadimpactontheirgrade.Othersconsiderthatteenagersshouldhavejobswhiletheyarestillstudents.AsfarasIamconcerned,Iagreewiththelatter.Becauseteenagerscanlearnamountofusefulexperiencethroughworkingandtheythinkthroughthejobtheywillacquiresomeknowledgeofhowtogetagoodrelationshipwithothers.

開頭4：

Itisnotraretoseemanystudentsdozingoffordoingotherthingswhiletheprofessoristryinghisbestexplainingatheory.Mostpeopleclaimthatthisphenomenonresultsfromthesevereschoolattendanceruleandsuggestthatstudentsshouldbegivenmorerighttodecidewhichclasstoattendaccordingtotheirowninterestandtheirjudgmentofthevalueoftheclass.Thisideaisstronglyopposedbynumerouspeoplewhoholdtheopinionthatitisthefaultofthestudentsthatleadstothecurrentproblem.Theystandonthegroundthatstudentsdonotreallyknowwhattheyareparticularlysuitabletomakeresearchonandwhatkindofclassisremarkablyvaluable.Consequentlytheythinkhighlyoftherulethatstudentsshouldattendalltheclasses.AsfarasIamconcerned,strictschoolattendancereallybenefitsthestudentsinnotonlyacquiringknowledgebutalsotheirsocialskills.

開頭5：

Technologyreferstoskills,knowledge,andtechniquesthathumanbeingsuseintheirdailylifeandwork.Aseverybodymayfind,technologydevelopsdaybyday.Howdoesthedevelopmentoftechnologyaffectourlife?Manypeopleholdtheopinionthatitisduetothedevelopmentoftechnologythathumanbeingshaveaccesstothecomfortablemodernlife.Ontheotherhand,anumberofpeoplearealwaysawareofallkindsofdestructiveinfluenceofthetechnologicaldevelopmentonus.AsfarasIamconcerned,thedevelopmentoftechnologydoesfarmoregoodthanharmtopeople’shappiness.開頭6：

I’magreatbelieverinluck,andIfindtheharderIwork,themoreIhaveofit.ThomasJefferson

Thereislittledoubtthatifpeoplewanttobesuccessful,hardworkingisanessentialelement.Whileitisalsoclearthatluckplaysanundeniableroleinone’srealizingdreams.IcompletelyagreewithThomasJeffersonandbelievethathardwork,inmostcases,helpspeoplefindandcatchtheirluckandfinallyreachtheirlifegoals.開頭7：

Justimagineifastudentcannotfindateachertohelphim,whatwillhappen?Somepeoplebelievethathecanlearnbetterbyhimself;however,eachcoinhastwosides,othersthinkthatitisalwaysbettertohaveateacher.Iagreewiththelatterone.Teacherscanhelpustoacquireamountsofknowledgeeasierthanotherswhostudyalone,leadustochoosetherightwayofourlife,andletusknowhowtobeagoodperson.開頭8：Withthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,moreandmorecompanies(includinginternationalcompaniesandsmallcompanies)arefounded,buttherearenotenoughpeopletotakethesepositions.Soalargenumberofworkingopportunitiesareprovidedtopeoplewhoarestillteenagerstudents.Insomecountries,somepeoplethinkifteenagersdoajobwhiletheyarestillstudyinginschool,itmayhaveabadimpactontheirgrade.Othersconsiderthatteenagersshouldhavejobswhiletheyarestillstudents.AsfarasIamconcerned,Iagreewiththelatter.Becauseteenagerscanlearnamountofusefulexperiencethroughworkingandtheythinkthroughthejobtheywillacquiresomeknowledgeofhowtogetagoodrelationshipwithothers.

中間段

中間段1:

Therearemanyqualitiesthatmakeupagoodneighbor,butthemostessentialofthesearefriendliness,helpfulness,andbeingconsiderate.Agoodneighbormustbefriendlysothatyoucanestablishgoodrelationswithhimorher,whilebeinghelpfulmakestheneighbormuchmoreofanaidineverydaylife.Finally,beingconsideratemakesaneighbormuchmorepleasanttolivenextto,asanover-friendlyandover-helpfulneighborwhodoesn"tconsideryourcircumstancesisratherunhelpful.中間段2：

Afriendlyneighborwhoishorriblyineptisstillnotverymuchhelp.Whilefriendlinessisessential,simplegood-willisnotenoughtomakeagoodneighbor.Ifyousufferedfromsomenaturaldisaster,orsomeaccident,ahelpfulneighborwouldbeabletodomorethingsthananeighborwhowasconcerned,butunabletohelp.Forexample,ifyourcarwouldn"tstart,imagineyourneighbordidn"tknowhowtousethejumpercables.Despitegoodintentions,yourneighbormightendupharmingyouoryourvehicle.Acapableandfriendlyneighborwhocouldhelpyouwithmanythingsthatyoumighthavetroubledoingalonewouldbeoffargreaterhelp.中間段3：

Ofcourse,whilefriendlinessandcapabilitiesareimportant,withoutamutualunderstandingandconsideration,anyneighborcanbehorriblyfrustrating.Inthemodernworld,whereyourneighborcouldbeofacompletelydifferentculture,understandingandconsiderationareveryimportant.Imagineaneighborwhohappenstobeafivestarchefinvitesyouoverfordinner.Thoughhecertainlyhastheappropriatetalentsforcooking,andthegoodwilltoinviteyouover,ifhefailedtoconsideryourcultureorpersonalpreferences,youmightnotexamplethemealatall.Forexample,ifyouwereJewishandfollowedyourreligiouslimitationsonfoods,youwouldn"tbeabletoeatmanydifferentkindsoffoods.Thus,withoutconsiderationforyourcultureandsituation,allofthegood-willyourneighbormightbringwouldbeuseless.中間段4：

Anygoodneighborwillbeagoodfriend,someoneyoufeelcomfortableinvitingtoyourhouse,eatingdinnerwith,andtakingcareofyourhouseifyouaregone.Noneofthesethingswouldbepossibleifyourneighboronlymindedhisorherownbusinessanddidn"tbothertogotoneighborhoodactivities.Thoughthisneighbormightnotbetrouble,heorshecertainlywouldn"tbeverymuchfuntolivenextto,asyoumightaswellnothaveaneighboratall.Afriendlyneighborcanmaketheneighborhoodfarmoreinvitingandfun;imagineaneighborhoodwherenoneofyourneighborsinvitedyoutoneighborhoodactivitiesandleftyoucompletelyalone.Thisneighborhoodwouldcertainlyseemlessinterestingcomparedwithaneighborhoodwhereyourneighborgreetedyouwhenyouarrivedandinvitedyoutosomeneighborhoodactivities.中間段5：

Istronglysupporttheideaofouterspaceexplorationforitmaybenefithumansnotonlyinthepresentbutalsointhefuture.Byexploringtheouterspace,governmentsshouldjointheirhandstotakeadvantageofthelatesttechnologyandskillsinvariousfieldstoguaranteethesuccessoftheprogram,ensuringthereturningofthepricelessequipmentandespeciallypreciouslivesoftheastronauts,thusintensifyingthecooperationofdifferentcountriesintheworld.因果論證

Andatthesametime,theachievementoftheouterspaceexplorationprogrammaysurelycontributetothewellbeingofouroffspringinmanyways.Ourchildrenandgrandchildrenmayhavemorelivingspaceandwillnolongersuffertheamazingpopulationdensityoftheearthandtheymayliveinanothersatelliteoneday.Inaddition,theadvancedtechnologyincommunicationsandremotecontroldevelopedintheouterspaceexplorationprogramaresuretobecomepopularlyusedinthefuturelife.舉例論證

Ascanbeseenfromtheaboveanalysis,theadvantagesofcarryingouttheouterspaceexplorationareobviousandallowusnoexcusetovoteagainstit.

中間段6：

Peoplewholiveinasmalltownoftenhaveamuchcomfortablelifestyle.Mostofthemdonothavetosufferhighworkingstress.Althoughtheaveragepayismuchlessthanthatofbigcities,thepriceofdailynecessities,suchasvegetablesormeat,isusuallylessexpensive.Insteadofsufferinglonelinesswhichisprevalentinbigcities,childrenmightgrowupmorehealthilybecauseofharmoniousrelationshipamongresidentsinasmalltown.Peopleinasmalltowndon’thavetogetupsoearlyinthemorningbecausetherehasbeennotrafficjam,andnobodydrivessofastinasmalltownastocausecaraccidentswhicharecommonlyseeninalmosteverystreetinbigcities.Theymighthavefewerchannelsintelevision,buttheyhavemorefriendsreadilyavailabletochatorentertainwith.

結(jié)尾段

結(jié)尾1：

Studentsarethefuturemastersoftheworld.Onlywhentheyhaveaccumulatedabundantknowledgeandtactfulsocialskillscantheybeconfidenttosaytheyarefullypreparedtomanagetheworld.Strictlyrequiredschoolattendanceisoneofthebestapproachestohelpingstudentsaccomplishthetwo.Whileatthesametimeschoolsshouldalsotakemeasurestodrawtheattentionfromallstudentsandimprovethequalityofteaches""lecturestobeappealingtoallstudents.結(jié)尾2：Inconclusion,peoplearelivinglongernowowingtothedevelopmentofmedical,cookingandmatchingfoodinrightwaysandsoon.Ifeelthatifpeoplewishtolivelonger,perhapstheyshouldtakemoreexercisesandaskfortheexpertsofnutritionhowtocookmealsandmatchfoodinrightways.

結(jié)尾3：

Inconclusion,Ithinkalthoughadvancesintechnologymaydosomeharmtopeople"slifetosomedegree,mostimpactsexertedbytheforwardpaceoftechnologyaredesirableandbeneficial.Weshouldtakemeasurestoguidethedirectionofthedevelopmentoftechnologyandpreventallkindsofimproperuseoftechnologysothatwecanenjoymoreconveniencesinbothworkandindailylifebroughtbytheeverimprovingtechnology.結(jié)尾4：

Inaword,Ibelievethatuniversitiesshouldrequirestudentstotakeclassesinmanysubjects,ratherthanrequirestudentstospecializeinonesubject.Onlybydevelopingthecomprehensiveknowledgeandskillsofeachstudent,canastudentusewhathe/shehaslearnedinamoreeffectivewayandreallyenjoythefruitsoftheirhardwork.Andwhatismore,thegreatercomprehensiveexpertisethestudentshave,thestrongeranationwillbe

好句

1.Itisjustlikeeveryembryohastogothroughdifferentstagesduringhisdevelopment.Andthese

stagesareoftensimilartothestagesduringtheevolutionofhumanbeing.

2.ithinkitistruethatbothfriendsandfamilycaninfluenceayoungadult"sbehavior.However

whenitcomestowhichoneismoreimportant,ithinktheanswerobviouslygoestothelatter.Thereasonsareasfollows

大牛的三篇例文

于是我的所得：思想有多遠(yuǎn)，你就寫多遠(yuǎn)，跟著自己的思想走�。ó�(dāng)然要于自己的TS有關(guān)）請(qǐng)大家花個(gè)幾分鐘好好體會(huì)一下這句話，這并不是我所能傳授的一種很CONCRETE的東西，這句話太ABSTRACT了，我并不奢望大家都能一下子有所感覺，但是希望大家在練習(xí)的時(shí)候會(huì)對(duì)這句話有更多的體會(huì)。我也是在不斷的練習(xí)中慢慢深化這個(gè)理念的。

用這個(gè)思想我來給大家一個(gè)EXAMPLE吧：TOPIC:Petsshouldbetreatedasfamilymembers

首先確定自己的立場，大概估計(jì)一下自己在那一方面的話比較多，正、反、還是中立。選好后刻在你腦子里，免得偏題。

我的立場：Yes,theyshouldbetreatedasfamilymemebers.

很明顯選擇這個(gè)立場就是要選擇PETS對(duì)我們有利的地方，不然的話誰要它�。∮谑遣煌５膯栕约�，PETS對(duì)我們有什么好處呢？首先PETS都有什么樣的呢？第一個(gè)出現(xiàn)在我腦子里的是狗。那么狗對(duì)我們有什么好處呢？人類最忠實(shí)的朋友。但是怎么繼續(xù)呢？養(yǎng)過狗的人體會(huì)深刻，可以把自己和狗的相處講出來，沒養(yǎng)過的難道就不能編一段自己與狗相處的日子嗎？于是我編了一段：小的時(shí)候家里養(yǎng)的狗是我的唯一玩伴，給我?guī)�來了快樂。狗還有什么好處呢？大家還在什么情況下聽過狗呢？導(dǎo)盲犬聽過吧，它們具體工作是什么呢？這下你有得寫了吧，這個(gè)可以寫上幾大段都不重復(fù)，導(dǎo)盲犬幫助盲人領(lǐng)路，于是盲人可以自己出巡不用請(qǐng)個(gè)小保姆照顧，它們知道車來了要停，走盲道，甚至有的狗可以幫人開門！不管它們能否做這些事，寫上去再說（當(dāng)然不要太離譜，它們可不會(huì)飛）。再想想平時(shí)什么地方狗多呢？公園里啊！老年人大清早出來散狗，晚上吃完飯還要散，說明什么呢？說明他們?cè)诰�神上�?duì)狗有依賴性啊，兒女外出打工，工作，一年難得回來幾回，狗自然而然可以擔(dān)當(dāng)這個(gè)DUTY了，甚至還有些老人沒有兒女，于是它們把自己的PETS當(dāng)成自己的兒女了。有些地方還有什么狗的各種各樣的比賽，這些比賽得獎(jiǎng)了是對(duì)家庭的一種榮譽(yù)，沒得獎(jiǎng)大家也在一起HAPPY了一下啊......等等等等。大家要不停的問自己，出現(xiàn)了思想，不要覺得太膚淺而PASS掉，多聯(lián)想一下，思路不是你一開始分析TOPIC的時(shí)候就完成的，有的時(shí)候你在寫的時(shí)候，思路會(huì)源源不斷的涌出，這個(gè)時(shí)候說明你初得要領(lǐng)了。

現(xiàn)在奉上我寫的一篇關(guān)于這個(gè)TOPIC的文章：

……Petsareuniversalallovertheworld.Peopleindifferentcountrieshavepets.Ihavebeenwonderingwhyitissocommonforustohavepets?Well,theyareapparentlyourfriends.Sometimestheyaregreathelpers.Andtosomepeople,theyareimportantfamilymembers.

Petscanbefriendswithwhichwecanliveandspendtime.IusedtohaveapetdogwhenIwasveryyoung.It"stheonly

friendIhavebecauseMomandDadusedtobetoobusywiththeirworktospendtimewithme.TheonlywaythatIcould

havefunwastoplaywithmypet.Weusedtorace,swim,andevensleeptogether.Ithasauniquepositioninmychildhood

memory,becauseitmademyearlieryearssomuchfuninsteadofbeinglonelyandmiserable.

Petsarenotmerelyanimalsthatservethepurposeof**funforusassomeonewouldthink.Insteadtheyhavetheir

positioninthissocietythatisirreplaceable.Theyareimportanthelperstothedisabled.Forexample,somedogscanleadthe

wayfortheblind.Theyknowwhichwouldbethesafepathtogo,andtheyknowwhentostopifacarpassesby.Theyhave

madethelivesoftheblindmucheasierbecausethesepeoplecangooutsidethemselves.Besidesleadingtheway,somepetscanevenopenthedoorforpeoplewhocouldnotstanduprighttodoit.Ican"timaginewhattheirlifewouldbewithouttheseaidpets.

Petscanalsoserveasapsychologicalcomfortfortheold.It"squitecommontoseetheoldwalktheirdogsinnearbyparksearlyinthemorningandevening.Thesepeopleneedsomeonetobewithallthetime.Buttheirchildrenhavetheir

ownlivesandit"snotpossibleforthemtobewiththeirparentsallthetime.Thereforethisdutyistakenbythesepets.Some

oldpeoplewhodon"thaveanychildreneventreatthesepetsastheirchildren.

Petsaredifferentthanotherwildanimals,.Theyplayamoreimportantroleinourlivesinsomeway.Theymakeushappy

andhelpus.Soifwedecidetohaveapetinourfamily,weshouldalsobepreparedtotreatitasafamilymemberinreturnforthebenefitsitbringsus.

讀過這篇文章會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)，并沒有什么閃光句型或者詞語，文采一般，但是我考試時(shí)的作文也不會(huì)比這個(gè)高到那里去。這個(gè)是我剛有體會(huì)時(shí)早期的寫作，大家初步分析，并試著自己就一個(gè)TOPIC分析分析看。呆會(huì)我會(huì)再來再給大家分析幾個(gè)TOPIC，并附上我的寫作。大家千萬不要試著模仿我的用詞用句，就像我說的，都很簡單，每個(gè)人都會(huì)，關(guān)鍵看看文章的思路和思想。如文章有不妥之處，大家敬請(qǐng)指出，我們共同進(jìn)步。

TOPIC:itismoreimportanttoworkatajobthatyouenjoythanitistoearnalotofmoney

Idisagreewiththestatementthatitismoreimportanttoworkatajobthatyouenjoythanitistoearnalotofmoney.**alotofmoneymeanshavingmoreopportunities.ThereforeitismorebeneficialtomethansimplytakingajobthatIenjoy.

Atthiscurrentsituationwherewearesufferingfromthisglobaleconomicdownturn,whatconcernsmethemostiswhetherornotIcanlivethroughthishardtime,whetherornotIwillbeabletosupportmyfamily.ThereforeIdefinitelywantajobthatIcanmakemoremoneybecauseitmeetsmymosturgentrequirement.Enjoymentwouldbenegligiblewhencomparedwithlivelihood.

**alotofmoneywillalsoleadtomorehappinessthanthejoyyougetfromtakingajobyoulike.Forexample,ifIamamillionaire,notonlycanIprovidemyfamiliesadecentliving,butalsoIcanhaveexcessmoneysothatIcandonatetothepoorerpeople.IthinktheoverallhappinessofthepoorgettingaidwouldovermountthehappyfeelingImyselfget.Inthissense,takingajobthatIenjoyratherthanajobwithadecentpaywouldbealittlemoreselfish.

Finally,havinghighpaymentjobdoesn"tnecessarilymeanthatIwilllosethechancetodothejobthatIenjoy.IcancertainlyconsiderdoingthejobthatIenjoyafterIsaveacertainamountofmoney.Thisstrongeconomicfoundationwillreducealotofmyconcerns,thereforeIcandothejobthatIlikemorefreelyandIwillendupenjoyingthejobmore.Besidesthisbenefit,astrongeconomicabilityalsomakesitpossibleformetoenjoyalotmorethings.Then,maybethejobthatIonceconsideredinterestingwillnotbethatfunanymore.

Whilesomepeoplemayarguethatthisstanceistoorealisticormaterialistic,Iwanttoremindeveryonethatwe,ashumanbeings,havemoreobligationsthatweneedtofulfill.Ahighpaymentjobwillmakethesealoteasiertomeet.What"smore,italsowillofferusopportunities.Sopaymentwillbemynumberoneconcernwhenichooseajob.

TOPIC：Advancesintransportationandcommunicationliketheairplaneandthetelephonehavechangedthewaythatnationsinteractwitheachotherinaglobalsociety.Chooseanothertechnologicalinnovationthatyouthinkisimportant.

Althoughinternetcameintobeingabout2decadesago,ithaschangedthewaywelivemuchmorethanthelast200years.Itsinfluenceonbusiness,communicationandinformationissoprofoundthatpeoplenowsimplycan"tlivewithoutit.

Basedonthedevelopmentofinternet,alotofnewtypesofbusinessrangingfrominternationalconglomeratetoregionalsmallonlineshopsarealsoestablished.ThemostfamousinternetbasedinternationalconglomeratewouldbeGoogle.Companieslikethisbasicallydonotsellproductsbuttheirservice.Thischangedthetraditionalwayofdoingbusinesswhichalwaysinvolvedsomeconcreteproductsselltopeople.Internetopensacyberworldinwhichahugemarketisuntapped.Besideslargecompanies,internetalsoprosperssmallbusinesses.Forexample,localstorescandotheirbusinessonline.Alltheyhavetodoistocreateawebsiteoftheirownandallcustomersneedtodoistogototheirwebsitesandorderwhattheywant.Thentheyjustneedwaitathomefortheproductstheyjustpurchasedtobedelivered.Thisway,weneverneedtoworryaboutthetraditionalexhaustingshopping.

Internetalsofundamentallychangedthewaypeoplecommunicate.Therearealotofchattingprograms,suchasMSN,YAHOOMESSENGER,SKYPE,thatmakeitpossibleforpeoplefromdifferentpartsoftheworldtohaveaconversationwitheachotheraslongaseveryonehasaccesstointernet.Theyevenprovideaudioandvideoservicesmeaningnotonlypeoplecanchat,butalsotheycanhearandseeeachother.Besidesthat,whatreallymakesthemappealingisthattheydon"tchargeusfordoingthesethings.Theseadvantagesdefinitelysurpasstheservicethatmobilephoneprovidesus.

Internetisalsolikeahugetankthatcancontainalmostinfiniteinformation.Asearchhasshownthatrightnowtheinformationthatinternetcanprovideusexceedsanylibraryintheworldandsomeevenarguethatithasmoreinformationthanallthelibrariesintotal.Icertainlywouldn"tdoubtthat.Iuseinternettosearchforalotofinformation.WheneverIhaveanprojecttofinish,thefirstthingIdoistogototheinternettofindrelevantmaterials.

Thereisnodoubtthatinternethashadafundamentalchangeonoureverydaylife.Thoughtherearemanyproblemsthataccompanywithit,wecan"tdenythatinternetisoneofthemostinnovationsinhumanhistory.

TOPIC:Youareplanningtostudyabroad.Whatdoyouthinkyouwilllikeanddislikeaboutthisexperience?Why?

Studyingabroadisbecomingmoreandmorepopularamongcollegestudents.Itnotonlyprovidesusopportunitytolearnsophisticatedtechnologyandknowledgebutalsogivesuschancestoexperiencedifferentculturesandlife.Howeverthefactthatitwillgetmeawayfrommyfamilyandfriendsforalongtimeisabothertome.

OneofthemajorreasonsthatIwanttostudyabroadistoacquirestateofthearttechnologyinaparticularfield.NowIammajoringelectricalengineering,andIwanttogetfurthereducationinthisfieldasapostgraduate.HoweverelectricalengineeringisnotaswelldevelopedinmyownnationasitisintheUS.Soinordertobeanexpertinthisfieldandtofollowmypersonalinterest,studyingabroadisaverygoodoption.ThiswayIcanalwayshaveaccesstovaluableknowledgeaswellaskeepmyselfinthefrontierinelectricalengineering.

Besidesgettingtechnicalknowledge,studyingabroadisalsoachanceformetolearnaboutdifferentculture.It"squiteobviousthatlifeinanothercountrywouldbetotallydifferentfromthatofmyown.Firstofall,IhavetospeaktheirlanguagesothatIcaninteractwithotherpeople.Secondly,Ihavetoadjustmyselftotheirwayofthinking,andwayofdealingwithpeople,inotherwords,socialskills.FinallyIwouldalsoacquaintmyselfwithavarietyofnewthingsthatsimplydon"texistinmyhomecountry.Forexample,AmericanfootballisnotthatpopularinChina,butifIstudyinAmericaandIwanttohavetopicwithotherstudents,IthinkwhatIwillhavetodoistoforcemyselftowatchit,leastofall,gettoknowitalittlebit.Theseexperienceswouldbeveryvaluablesinceyoucannotgetthemanywhereelsebutthisparticularcountry.

WhileIexperiencenewcultureIwouldcertainlymissthingsandpeopletraditionalinmyowncountry.Studyingabroadisalong-terminvestment.Imightbeawayfromhomeforayearormaybeeventwoyears,whichmeansthatIwillnotbeabletoseemyfamiliesandfriendsforthatlongtime.Withoutdoubt,Iwillmissthemalot,andsometimesthismissmightbesointensethatIsimplycan"tdealwithit.What"smoreIwillmissthetraditionalfoodssomuchaswell.IneverexpectthatIcanfindthesimilarflavorofthosefoodsinanothercountry.Sothatposesmeanotherproblemofstudyingabroad.

Despiteallthesedisadvantages,Istillprefertostudyabroad.Becauseafterall,myultimategoalistolearnsophisticatedknowledgeandtechnology,whichcouldbetterpreparesmeformyfuturechallenges.

三篇應(yīng)該差不多了吧，大家好好看看吧。

最后我來說說綜合寫作：

這個(gè)其實(shí)面很廣，不好說。比如說有的是READING中三個(gè)論點(diǎn)非常明顯，然后LECTURE中再來三個(gè)論點(diǎn)，要么SUPPORT要么OPPOSE。這類的綜合寫作相對(duì)來說是比較好寫的，比BARRON，DELTA上的綜合寫作都要好寫。大家可以用高分120寫作，上面基本上是這一類的。我只有一次IBT考試經(jīng)驗(yàn)，我考的時(shí)候就是這一類的，但是至于是不是所有的考試都是這一類的，我就不好說了。所以大家還是最好把每一類的都寫寫，重點(diǎn)可以放在我剛才講的那一類上。

下面附上一篇我考試前一天晚上寫的這一類的文章（高分120上的關(guān)于馬可波羅的）

Inthissetofmaterials,thereadingpassagediscussesreasonsthatseemtoshowthatMarcoPolonevermadeittoChina,whileinthelecture,theprofessorarguesthatshethinksMarcoPolodidgotoChinaandgivesherreasons.

ThefirstpointmadeinthereadingpassageisthatthefactthatMarcoPoloneverpickedupanyChineseandhisreferencetoChineselocationsareborrowedfromPersianlanguagedemonstratesthathedidnotarriveatChina.Howeverinthelisteningpassage,whiletheprofessorconfirmsthefact,shearguesthattheborrowingofnamesfromPersianisreasonablebecausethePersianregioniswhatconnectsAsiaandEuropeinthepast.ThesecondpointmadeinthereadingpassageisthatMarcoPolonevermentionedteaandteahouseinChinainhisbooks.Thereforeit"sno

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